2 February, 2013
Writer’s Checklist for Informational Essay
1. Does my introduction clearly state my thesis and give the reader an indication of the direction my essay will take? I believe my introduction does clearly state my thesis and give the reader an indication of the direction my essay will take.
2. Are my topic sentences and body paragraphs clear and well developed? My topic sentences and body paragraphs are clear and well developed.
3. Have I fully supported my thesis with ample supporting details and examples? I have fully supported my thesis.
4. Have I used a sufficient number and variety of sources in my paper? I have used a sufficient number and variety of sources in my paper.
5. Are all of my sources properly cited in the body of my paper according to MLA format? I think all of my sources are properly cited in the body of my paper.
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2 February, 2013
Every fifty-three minutes someone is killed and every ninety seconds someone is injured in a drunken driving crash (NHTSA 2012). Driving while drunk is very dangerous. Drunk driving is preventable; several people die every day and there are plenty of consequences out there.
First and foremost, there are several programs out that prevent drunk driving. People just choose not to use them. People can go out and have a good time and still be safe. If people feel the need to drink they should have a plan. Assign someone as a designated driver. Designated drivers do not always work; sometimes they get caught in the moment and start to drink. That is when a cab should be called. There are also some cars that have an ignition interlock program. With that program, if the driver’s BAC level is higher than a specific level the car will not work (CDC 2011). Some consequences of drunk driving includes court, confiscating license plates, suspending licenses, fines, jail, impounding, and educational classes (Hanson 2012).
Alcohol affects a person's ability to make quick decisions on the road. The annual cost of alcohol related crashes is over fifty-one billion (CDC 2011). A DUI conviction remains on a person's criminal record. Some states have a strict "zero tolerance" for under aged drinkers. Each state has its own law on how a person with a DUI will be punished. Around thirty people die every day in a car wreck involving alcohol (CDC 2011).
In conclusion, just about one-third of wrecks involve alcohol (CDC 2011). Every forty-eight minutes someone dies in a drunken driving wreck (CDC 2011). Drinking while driving is very dangerous so always have several plans when going out.
CDC (2012). Impaired Driving. Retrieved from http://www.cdc.gov/motorvehiclesafety/impaired_driving/impaired-drv_factsheet.html
D.J. Hanson (2012). Alcohol Problems and Solutions. Retrieved
NHTSA (2011). Traffic Safety Facts. Retrieved from