1. Active reading-- includes taking notes, using a symbol system you developed. Looking up words you don’t know.
2. Journaling—gets out thoughts you’ve had while reading Generate the important questions: Should relate to at least one of our elements of a story. (plot, setting, character, tone, mood, etc.) Example from “Hills Like White Elephants:” “How does Hemingway use space and setting in HLWE?”
3. After journaling… finding evidence. Look for quotes from the text that relate to your question. In HLWE, because it’s a very short story, find anything you can. Accumulate as much as you can- a “bank of evidence”. Starting small—the thesis will be the answer to this question.
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When Jig needs to leave the conversation, Hemingway again describes the Ebro: “The girl stood up and walked to the end of the station. Across, on the other side was fields of grain and trees along the banks of the Ebro. Far away, beyond the river, were mountains.”
6. Analyze the quotes. (at least 2 sentences of analysis for each quote.)
6a. How would it relate to other evidence?
6b. How does the quote relate to your topic question?
6c. Describe the subtext
Arguing over the operation, both the American and the girl seek a way out of the conversation: “’Would you please please please please please please please please stop talking.’ He did not say anything but looked at the bags against the wall of the station.” Jig cannot continue the conversation, and she explodes, offering the first meaningfully emotional moment of the story. Instead of responding to the emotion, the man looks away, ignoring both the conversation and Jig. He refocuses his attention on the bags against the station wall, which remind him of the train to come and their eventual movement from the valley. Hemingway, therefore uses the metaphor of travel to describe the couples’ inability to “stay put” and have the conversation they need to have.